David Vijay
Here are a few options, choose the one that best fits the desired level of formality: **Option 1 (Minimal changes, focuses on grammar):** "The seller was very nice; she knew a lot about her products. However, like all outlet stores, they have old models which are as expensive as the new ones I found in another nearby Samsonite store." **Option 2 (Slightly smoother flow):** "The seller was very nice, and she knew a lot about her products. However, as with all outlet stores, they have old models that are as expensive as the new ones I found in another nearby Samsonite store." **Option 3 (More concise):** "The seller was very nice and knowledgeable about her products. However, like all outlet stores, they carry old models that are as expensive as the new ones I found in a nearby Samsonite store." --- **My recommended edit (balancing all constraints):** "The seller was very nice, and she knew a lot about her products. However, like all outlet stores, they have old models that are as expensive as the new ones I found in another nearby Samsonite store."